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Dare (OctPoWriMo #13)

Safe
From the world
No one can reach me
I’m invincible in my
Box
No holes for air; I can’t breathe
I risk everything
To climb out
Free

Today’s OctPoWriMo offering is a Butterfly Oddquain based on the word prompts: chains, freedom, breakthrough, open mind, flight

Comments on: "Dare (OctPoWriMo #13)" (2)

  1. Angela van Son's avatar

    Beautiful! I love how it captures both the safety and the danger of a box.

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  2. Herbert Shapiro's avatar
    Herbert Shapiro said:

    We’d free the incarcerate race of man, that such a doom endures could you but creep into my skull, or I creep into yours.

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